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Friday, 15 February 2019

All About Me!

Please, allow me to introduce myself. Hello my name is Khiara and I am 12 years old and my favourite colours are Yellow, white and pink.

I really enjoy going to the beach, trampolining and being with my friends and family. My favourite subjects at school are P.e and art.

My favourite food is sushi and lollies and one my of my favourite shows is stranger things.

When I am older I would really like to do something with animals like be a part of DOC or something like that because I really love animals!

At home I live with my Mum, Dad, Brother and my dog who is a bulldog.

Thank you for taking the time to read this. I really appreciate it!



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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous18 February 2019 at 10:31

    hello Khiara,
    I really like how you gave information about yourself,I really enjoyed reading it, next time you should work on your punctuation.

    Kind regards,
    Jess

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  2. Mr Adams22 February 2019 at 18:33

    Thanks for posting Jess. I like how you have tried to use the model of 'Positive, Thoughtful, Helpful' when commenting. Try saying exactly where her punctuation is not correct i.e. capital 'H' for 'Hello', or use full stops at the end of a sentence.
    Khiara- 'Brother' doesn't need to be a capital, unless you use his name.
    I love how you thank your readers for reading your post. Great job.

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