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Friday, 20 September 2019

My Narrative

           My Narrative 

It was a crisp, frozen morning in an isolated cramped town when Karathon was waking up, she rose from her warm and swampy bed. She was excited today because she got to go see her friend Neopolen (like the ice-cream) she leapt out of bed onto the wooden hardboard floor “ Yay!” she sang, as her brother walked past he asked “what are you doing weirdo?” he exclaimed, she quickly hesitated before saying “ n n nothing”  He walked away rolling his dark, deep eyes with frustration but that didn’t change her mind she continued to sing her happy tune! She skipped down the stairs then tripped “ugh!” she cried with agony, my ankle it going purple! Her mum rushed up the few stairs to see what the problem was. She looked down to see her daughter’s ankle was swollen and possibly sprained! They rushed to the hospital with her screaming the whole way and her dark brown hair waving in the wind (the window was open for fresh air.) As they entered the doctor's office the doctor looked at the x-ray and said “ I have some bad news!”...

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